by

Luis Deep Atmosfear
(Deep Atmosfear)

The good aspects of this tune - the artist controlled their piano volume well. OK, now the rest. The boom-chi intro irked me a bit. The light piano section combined with a rave-snare buildup was goofy. This is the third song I've judged in a row with bird samples.

the melody sounds too simple; the rythme is very basic too. But one good point is the good quality of the samples... but that's not enough to make a good'n interesting tune.

This is a decent song, but it's too random. There are like 2 different songs in one. The baseline from the first song is annoying and repeatative. The ending is a mishmosh.

hmmm some nice bits, nice use of soundeffects (like the boom with the thunderclap), but I think the drumline is a bit too simple and cheesy. hmmm... I can't shake the feeling that the tune should be a just a little bit faster, so it would feel tighter. Still, not a bad tune though.

It already bores me after the first two patterns. There is nothing much going on musically. Transitions from part to part were totally inadequate, mostly covered with loud boom effects or such. Piano was poorly tracked, too cold and sterile. You should handle the 'orgelpunkt' (that's german - but whatever it is in english, I have no idea.) better, I mean you use single bass note but some chords conflict with it. It really is possible to tweak almost anything to fit a static bassline. The part with vocals manages to set some mood, but I barely noticed when the song looped from ending to beginning, so similiar they were. And nothing really happened in between.