by

Vladislav Shadow
(Shadow)

Good breakbeats. Too repetitive, lacking variation. Drum solos would have been nice for a song like this(?), or at least some more drum fill-ins within segments. Needs more of a catch theme to improve the overall appeal. Tracking technique and quality samples were fine, but some samples are a bit worn out. The music generally sounded static and sometimes I feel it was going nowhere. Maybe needs more of a buildup somewhere? I know its suppose to be ambient, but it doesn't mean it can't have some dynamic changes.

The song starts like a classic goa or trance song. But the song appears to be starting all the time. I have not recognised the real or main part of the song yet. The song seems to be progressing all the time and as if the author itself does not really know where to lead this.

There is a terrific ambiance in this one. What a shame you did it so short, and used so famous old samples... Rythmic part are quite interresting, but avoid to confuse the listener with so complex drums-patterns. The beginning of the song is neat, but it seems you lacked of inspiration to finish it so greatly. I would have liked to hear more legato on strings pat18. On the rush ? The ending is as poor as fast... Pity. Good technique, although there is no real use of stereo.

Extreamly ambient little or suddle changes throughout. Lacking effective panning. Low originality as there just wasn't much going on, this also hurt your form.

Very well done the song was different the beat was good, samples could have been better, the paterns were well done.