by

Samuel Digital Negro
(Digital Negro)

Okay. First of all, the beginning was too long and boring. It took 2 minutes before the song "started" and something really happened, and that's well too long. But when I thought, that finally this song "started", it soon "ended" again, and the musicstyle changed. And then again and again, the same thing happened again. I don't really understand the changes between musicstyles, why did you have to change them so many times. The song was like several different little songs, and none of them showed anything special.

The only parts that have promise are the 1st part (intro) and the 3rd part (last part). The rest of this song aren't really pleasing to the ear. The mixing is bad, your samples are all ripped from well-known sources, it's very repedative, and its obvious that you have not been tracking long. My suggestion to you: Skip MC7, enter MC8. (I actually kinda liked your intro, by the way. Those bird samples were creepy, being repeated that way)

this track sure takes it's time to drag its feet over the intro, and then the sample used after the birds stop on pos 10 loops very badly :P things just go downhill from there. bleh

Intro is not controlled : why do you cut off your strings ? Samples are badly looped, transitions are inexistant, sound is impersonnal. There are some good ideas, but heavily hurted by lack of method. Work more. The style doesn't make all.

The beginning is kinda slow but it gets into it it is pretty neat. nice samples. but just watch the repitition. this song gets to repetitive. pretty neat though. I like the organ-esque part.