by

Dave Hiroshima
(Hiroshima)

I don't know, should the melodies of this song remind the listener of terror? Well, at least me they didn't remind much of anything. The song was way too repeative, pretty much same thing through the whole song. And that's not a good thing. Your technique isn't very good. And in fact, nothing in this song was very good, nothing to remember of.

The melody really needs to be improved. The "drumtrack" looks OK so far. Sorry for this VERY short comment but I just realised that the actual deadline is at Sun 10/8 00:00 GMT instead of Sun 10/8 24:00 GMT! I'm terrible sorry.

Ever heard random music generated by some silly progs ? It seems you did that way with your keyboard. Rythmic part is not coherent enough to make a groovy beat, and harmony is too "experimental" to analyze whatever. Ah, your strings were great :) You made it short, but it's a positive point in that case.

This doesn't work at all. Strange leads, no sense of orchestration, random notes, and dischord all around. You did evoke musical terror, however.

The percussion in this piece is very jumbled and random, and sounds plain confusing. The melody is even more random than the percussion, as is the bassline. This doesn't come across as music at all. The "swing beat" section near the end is simply bizarre. If this is music, it's by a definition I've never encountered.