by

George stereoman
(stereoman)

The song would have needed some more feeling to it. It felt so empty. Anyway, the song was a bit too repeative. The leads should've been louder, they just lost in the middle of drums and that "main"theme. Your technique is proper, but it won't help much in this kind of empty and repeative song.

Technically OK, no problems here. Sorry for this VERY short comment but I just realised that the actual deadline is at Sun 10/8 00:00 GMT instead of Sun 10/8 24:00 GMT! I'm terrible sorry.

This is a very profesisonally produced song with crystal clean rythmn and subtle yet captivating bass. It works very well and suits its style perfectly. The acompanying muffled organ sound is perhaps a little too pervasive after a while and would be better off being reduced in volume a little after the introduction. The ending is also a little to abrupt and maybe could have fallen back to a minimalist ending similar to the introduction given that the same tone was carried throughout the piece.

Exciting percussion, a naturally flowing progression and nicely varying leads carry this song very well. The drums are the most impressive part of this piece. Well done.

Some of your samples are out of tune. Watch out for that, it really bugs some people (me). The songs ok, sometimes I get the feeling as if some of the samples don't really go together, but that's just me.