by

Sam ZimmerMan
(ZimmerMan)

Your song is nice to listen, a decent piece. Cool samples. I noticed that some of them are a bit out of tune... You should correct this by setting the fine tone more accurately. The arrangement is powerful, I really liked it, the only weakness I found are the drums, they are a bit simple and mono. Try to pan those hihats and snares. I liked the melody when I was listening to it, but I must say, I won't remember it some hours later.

Sorry, I don't like this tunes at all. Bad samples(sound as if they were taken out of a general midi soundcard), bad tracking technique(your glissado effects is really bad), the rythm needs more work. The piano solo in the middle of the tune is good. Sample 12 doesn't fit into this style of music.

Oldies and goldies, this tune remember the old good days of amiga demo scene, for some samples type and armonics tune evolution. Remember not to use too much portamento commands with a lead sample, or at least, try to use a faster portamento speed. This song achieve an overall good score, and the tune remain in mind for some time.

Overall this is a pretty nice tune. The lead is a bit cliche, and the odd phonograph intro, though well done, adds nothing to the song. The samples are not spectacluar but are ok (I thought the cymbal crash sample was kind of annoying). None of the melodies were strong enough that I remembered them for long after I was done listening to the song, but they are all pleasant enough and the tracking is done very well. The little things thrown in here and there, like the e.g. the vocal sample and the piano, are kind of odd but interesting nonetheless. I liked the song.

An interesting intro, and an even more interesting choice of style :) I enjoyed the ideas you had in this song, although I feel that your lead was a bit too loud, although the rest of your mixing was good. The middle section is very nice and your skill with leads is good, I was impressed by the way you handled the drum section for the different parts too. An all round solid song, with no glaring flaws besides the piano's being a little out of tune and the mixing of the lead. A nice tune... Good Luck.