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MC6

 The Comments

The song comments of MC6 are one of the most valuable aspects of the judging process. It's these comments that help the composers evolve--this is one of the reasons the Music Contest gets better every year.

Song comments also take the most time on the part of the reviewer. It's inevitable that a good number of the judges will spend the last few minutes before the deadline, hacking away at the song comments, trying to get them sumbitted in time. Do yourself a favor and start early.


 How do I do it?

First and foremost, start early.

If possible, keep a text editor open when you're listening to the song and write comments as you review. This serves three purposes: first, you can't finish a comment in four minutes, so this will force you to listen to the song at least twice, which is a good thing. Second, it will allow you to point to specific patterns or samples, which is very good practice. Third, it duplicates your time, so you're not listening once and writing about it later.

If you can't open a text editor while you review, then at least put your comments on paper so writing it up will be faster later on.

Now, what should the comment look like? You're striving for a few things, here.

  • Be clear.
    Try to use well-formed english. Capitalize your sentences and end them with a period. Try not to use colloquial language.
  • Be thorough.
    Comment on all five categories. Tell them what you liked. Tell them what you didn't like. Give thoughtful reasons for each one. Explain what areas could be improved, and, if you can, how to improve them. Use sentences like "I marked you down in technique because..." and "I gave you a high originality rating for your...".
  • Don't be creul.
    Do not flame. Do not bash. Use clean language.
  • Don't get side-tracked.
    The composer doesn't want to hear about your pet. They don't care what you had for breakfast. Keep to the music. It's okay to explain how a piece makes you feel, or to briefly mention what the song reminds you of, but don't go on tangents--they waste your time as well as the composer's.
  • Don't try to guess who wrote the song.
    Comments like "You sound like Necros" and "This sounds like a Purple Lotion song" are not recommended. This is an anonymous contest, and it should stay that way. Try saying "Your overall sound was very professional" or "You make an excellent use of overdriven sounds" instead.


 Good Examples

This is a good example: the reviewer covered all the bases, gave reasons, and used specifics to point things out. My only complaint is the lack of caps.

"cheezy 80's style pop. the annoying hihat in channel 20 needs volume changes. 'E' way overused over channels 6, 7 and 8 for the main melody, and the lead is cut off in too many places which sounds harsh. the key change comes too later at pos 9; my ears wanted it sooner. the bass in the tune is too repetitive, and uses pointless panning slides. main melody needs porta effects in pos 13 to make it sound smoother, and sounds very strained in places. the sample set is okay but i spotted a few that i've seen several times before, most notably the drums. still, this type of tune doesn't demand especially original or high quality samples, which reflects the above average sample score. the tune faired badly in the originality section mainly because you take the jeroen tel influence too far throughout the piece. more key changes would have kept the song fresher and more interesting, and would have earned it a higher 'form' score. mediocre, but style is fairly covered."

This example, from the same song, was miserable. This is the kind of comment we want to avoid... Please don't do things like this! The reviewer makes a judgement, gives one simplistic comment, and then bashes the composer:

"It's awful. How the hell did it made for the second round, I don't know... It's so simple it hurts! The author didn't really care about the quality, I think."


 Not-so-bad Examples

This reviewer was a bit terse (because he was up late writing it the night before the deadline, tee-hee!), but he managed to cover all of the categories to one degree or another. There are a few specific examples, a few reasons, and he doesn't say anything rude. This is a passable review--this is the bare minimum you should strive for.

The echo on the bassoon is a bit much in that first pattern. The phrase that the pizzi strings are playing is great... what mode is that in? The volumes are all well-controlled... Pattern 6 is a very nice break. The 'lead' (piano?) could use a little more rhythmic variation-- it seems to be playing Half- or quarter-notes all the time, and the ending was abrupt. Excellent song.

This is another so-so review. The reviewer gets the right level of detail, but doesn't mention much about mood or originality. The last comment is one worth talking about: he comments on a factor that has nothing to do with the score. Should you do this? Yes, if you feel so inclined. As you recall, comments are there to help the composer make better music, and this is a valid point, even though it has no effect on its placement in the contest. Lastly, the opening comment about not being a rookie probably wasn't necessary. He could have instead said something like "tracked with more skill than you would expect from a rookie."

"Not a bad job at all, if this person truly is a rookie. I won't bitch about the drumloops since I use them myself :), the rhythm was cool. The acid samples in the beginning are a little too commonplace. The lead starting at order 32 worked quite well; wish they used it more/earlier in the tune. But the sineleads after that, as good as they were technically, were a little on the loud side, making them not fit in perfectly. Not that it affects the song, but maybe they should've put a little pause at the end of the tune so it didn't immediately restart."

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